It was a lazy summer day. I was having cornflakes with my favourite strawberry shake. As I was about to take a sip, a velvety phoenix swooped in and dropped my juicy shake. Before I could do anything, my glass was on the floor that ended up being a mess. In a fit of rage, I chased the poor bird and forced it out of the window. I found a white envelope (which was not white anymore) as I cleaned the floor. The envelope said Hogwarts in bold. I ignored it as I thought it was a prank and kept it aside. To my utter shock, the envelope opened itself and started mouthing the words written in it. The last line said, “Welcome to Hogwarts! You are invited to Hogwarts, the world of Witchcraft and Wizardry.” The letter left a ticket and a list of things that are available only at Diagon Alley.
I was puzzled as I had never heard of a place named Diagon Alley. It is not in Ahmedabad. At night when my uncle came home, I told him all about it. He was shocked as he knew about Hogwarts. Then I found my brain on the ground as I found out that my uncle went to Hogwarts and was a hero in his time in Hogwarts, “The great Harry Khandwala.” We sat that night in a different room. We talked about all of his adventures and days at Hogwarts. He told me about Diagon Alley and took me there the next day. We walked down the green, smoke-filled path and landed straight in Gringotts, the bank of wizards. My uncle took me to his chamber in the bank. Throughout the way, I was excited to see the little goblins and the work system. My uncle pointed at the money in his chamber and told me that he saved it for my fees when my day comes to go to Hogwarts.
We met Hermoine Granger, the Mayor of the Society, on our way out. She explained to us about the system and how this world works. She also told me about my uncle and his naive days. We met Ron, owner of a local shop who is Hermoine’s husband. He gave me some free toys and books for my studies. The last thing on my list was my first wand. We were on the way to Ollivanders to buy the said wand.
On our way, I saw an old woman who was covered in a scarf, I ignored it and went into the shop, but it is altogether a different story. Afterwards, Ollivander welcomed us and explained the wand choosing process for every witch or wizard. Then, I was handed a hornbeam wand made from a dragon’s heartstring. And when I swished the wand, it turned the whole shop upside down. Before I could do anything, a wand automatically came into my hand. So, I tried a swish { but I knew nothing would work}. I was surprised as nothing was wrong. I was awestruck when everyone around me said that it was blackthorn. And it was made by the same material used to make my uncle’s wand and the wand of you know whose!
I love the style of writing of this young writer. Keep it up ?
Very nice and interesting.
Excellent
Nicely written Mithilesh. Good clarity of word and grammar both. Many congratulations Mithilesh
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Mithilesh has always performed marvelous performances. This stuff is written skillfully.
Good Mithilesh, you have long way to go.
Best wishes always.
Keep writing
Very nice and creative piece of writing at this age Mithilesh… Keep it up
Excellent Mithilesh
Great story and took on a virtual tour to Harry Potter world and Hogwarts. Well done and keep it up.
Meaningful selection of words, keep it up dear.??
Very nice write-up at this age.
Great
Superb
That’s Incredible. How Extraordinary! Amazing Effort! Unbelievable …
Woww…it was treat to read… Very impressive little Champ… Keep It Up..
Very good job Mithilesh..keep going on??
Excellent use of Vocabulary … Good story …
Excellent narration.
Excellent write up at such an young age.
Absolutely awesome.. Well penned. Truly amazing..!!
Excellent skill of putting imagination into marvellous words
Best wishes to Champ
Nice one ..!;
Excellent skill of putting imagination into marvellous words
Best wishes to Champ
Excellent!
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Excellent.
very good Mithilesh
Super Awesome ?
Every scene I can imagine and feel while reading the story.
Very Attentive
Very Nice Mithilesh.
Warmest congratulations on your achievements.
Congratulations
Great writing skill
Keep it up dear
Beautiful Story, nicely Narrated.??
Awesom!!!!!!
Wonderfully converted thoughts in the beautiful lines.
Keep it up dear Mithilesh
Mithilesh is an asset to his classroom as well as school .
Not only is he a prolific writer but is a curious and intelligent boy . He does not hesitate in expressing his opinions and view points and is always striving for excellence .
Thanks ma’am..it’s are pleasure to have mentor like you
Good Job Mithilesh
Keep it up…
Very nicely articulated, Mithilesh!
Effectively drafted & expressed, Keep it up!
Hey Mithilesh, once again it’s good piece of stuff from you. Keep it up champ.!
Nice Mithilesh!
Keep it up!
Impressive…
Remarkable Job. Bravo….
Very Good ?
Really good piece..!!
Keep it up…!!!
Good one
Mithilesh you are doing awesomely well at this age dear. I must really appreciate your efforts and the use of language. You are unbelievable…Keep it up and take it to the next level. My best regards.
Excellent Mithilesh!!
Prince Mithilesh,
Amazing write-up.
Thank You Very much for introducing us to Hogwarts.
We can’t wait to dig deep and start utilising the resources you have introduced us all to.
We already have started feeling walking down the Green, Smoked filled path leading to Gringotts and To the Bank of Wizard, with Blackthorn Wand on our hands.
My regards to your uncle Harry Khandwala and Hermoine Granger.
Your Exuberance is Refreshing.
Regards.
Awesome writing ?
Awsm Mithilesh.
Keep it up
Excellent!
Excellent writing by very young writer mithilesh….. keep it up.
Great Work Mithilesh.
Keep it up ?
Great Work! Well curated and polished Execution. Keep it up!!!
Good going Mithilesh! Keep reading and keep grooming. . Good work.
Thank you ma’am
Very nicely written.
Excellent and superb work.
Very good Mithilesh
Very good Mithilesh.
Keep it up!!
Very Nice Mithilesh.
Brilliant ?
Too expressive, your story narration take’s one on tour. You make one feel it! Little writer with beautiful storytelling sense. Keep it up ? boy, good to go!
Very good Mithilesh
Nice Mithilesh. ✌
Excellent
Very good Mithilesh.
Keep it up……
Excellent ?? Mithilesh ??
Very good Mithilesh.
Keep it up!!
Excellent
Phenomenal
Excellent….
Keep it up!!!!
Nice writeup at this young age. Keep it up.
Excellent @ Mithilesh… Keep going… All the best for more such things…
Excellent mithilesh
Excellent. Keep it up. ?
Very nicely written? well done Mithilesh?
This is really prize winning.
He has a knack for thinking outside the box…You are a gifted perfermor…keep going boy!!
Superb imagination n also nicely written Mr.Jr.JK.. really awesome??????
Love his imagination, Creativity and great writing skill. Keep it up Mr. Khandwala… you are rocking…
Fabulous!
Excellent writing…
Very well done which you did
Excellent ???
Keep it up Champ??
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Very Nice.
Keep writing.
Excellent
Really Nice. Excellent ?
Very Well written Mithilesh?. Keep it up! May you inspire more students of your age for such amazing work. Shine like a star ?.
Very impressive writing mithilesh, keep it up and again many Congratulations for such a nice writing.
Good work
Amazing writing skill, wonderful imagination.
Nice Mithilesh.
Keep it up!!
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Really good piece
Awesome?
Excellent???. Keep it up.
Keep it up Mithilesh.
Nice one champ
You just nailed it….Wow….I read it twice thrice, many times….Superawesome!!!! Keep writing…. Best wishes from my side.
Good work… Keep it up ?
Good
Congratulations Mithilesh
Keep it up
Superb
Good mithilesh
Nice, Mithilesh, keep it up, we are proud of you.